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:: Thursday, February 16, 2006 ::

Jaunty tunes and feckless rhymes

A love song, a dozen a penny
Of these written are too many,
And often no more than things of Man
Of feelings we don't understand

A love song, of words that soothe
The savage beast, but bear no truth
A lie disguised as what we would hear
To mask the depth of that we fear

And anyone interested in writing a love song entitled "I wish I were taller"? It starts out with Six foot two, and five foot four / We were friends, I wanted more / Clad in red heels, she rocked my world / If only she would be my girl

Anyone? I think it would be hilarious, but I can't think of anymore.

Labels: Music, Poetry

:: And that's all she wrote 11:16 PM [+] ::
3 comments

3 Comments:

 Anonymous said...

Hey, the metre is a bit off; wrong number of syllables etc.
but i'll work on it. Which one is shorter? Guy or girl?

5:46 AM, February 17, 2006  

 nimezs said...

Ah, that's entirely up to you. And it's not a poem, it's a song, so meter would be off.

12:53 AM, February 19, 2006  

 Anonymous said...

i like the idea that the guy is shorter. it makes for a cuter song.

She's on the cover of vogue /
I look just like a rogue /
When we go out, people stare /
She said we make quite a pair

lame effort i know...

2:11 PM, March 02, 2006  

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